To the wind
A Poem by
Liz Alexander
You have made me sick
In a way
That I love you
Now you wont
Answer my calls
Once agian
My voice has gone
To the wind
© 2010 Liz Alexander
Author's Note
Part 1. Link to part 2: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Catlady/542633/
Inspired by: Lost
Finished: 4-28-10
Reviews
Been there oh so many times and you capture that feeling of being a victim trapped without a voice.
Posted 7 Years Ago
t is the way of love to hurt as much as you love
Posted 14 Years Ago
t is the way of love to hurt as much as you love
Sometime we can't win. Poem is strong and to the point. In the end. The people who tries to love and held on will feel peace within their life. I like the last line. A excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 14 Years Ago
Sometime we can't win. Poem is strong and to the point. In the end. The people who tries to love and held on will feel peace within their life. I like the last line. A excellent poem.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I like this, Direct and to the point.
Very well written and flows wonderful.
Which makes a very enjoyable read.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I like this, Direct and to the point.
Very well written and flows wonderful.
Which makes a very enjoyable read.
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Added on April 30, 2010
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In College. My major is Missions. Trying to pave my own way
I love writing about wonders, romance, and God.
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