To Live

Part 3 of The Having the heart to live

Heart is slowly beating

My pain is growing

As life is flowing

Out of me

I am becoming

Nothing with out you

I have lost

All my will

To live

Author's Note

Just let me know what you think
Inspired by: Beating
Finished: 4-28-10

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and sad poem. When we lose someone important. We can feel empty for a long time. A strong poem. Direct to the point and honest words.
Coyote

[deeps]

Just plain wonderful and so brillant.
I enjoyed this free spirit of a write.
This is wonderful. I like this alot.