La La Land

My dreams are haunted

I close my eyes

Why do I fall for guys like you

Each and every time

You dont talk to me

At all

I go to sleep

Hating you

In my dreams

You are my love

My savior

None of my friends

Can believe

I am falling for you

But neither can I

Your different in my dreams

Your kind and gentle

But I guess

I am not the girl for you

We are only

Ok in lala ladnd

Author's Note

Inspired by: Dream Creeper

Reviews

[Katie L]

i love it, full of emotion and your words are powerful, keep it up.

[Tate Morgan]

The Heart never sleeps unlike the mind
Forever it twists and turns.
and when the head has had enough
The heart of love still burns

[Jimmy Greenie]

This is good. You express the emotions well, and I love the last line just cos it seems kinda amusing and childish, yet also manages to be emotional.
Well done, this is really nice. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is very good. in la la land. Seem things are better. I like the story and the ending was perfect. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[deeps]

This is a well written expressive write here.