And Life is Over

 

And life is over

My world came crashing down

When I got the news

……Yesterday

At first I didn’t believe it

Really happened

In shock

Well maybe I still am

Some part of me

Still thinks him going to walk

In the door how he always does

But no it true

That struck me when

I saw my friends at lunch

All in tears

That day we all sat around

And comfort each other

I walked around in the daze

For the rest of the day

It took all the effort to do work

Nothing seemed really

……..Anymore

It happened so fast

The world crashing down

He was fine the day before

We had all seen him

He had two stinking weeks before

He could graduate

All my friends are hurting

He had a future and family

How can death happen so fast?

That no one can see it

It all makes you wonder

He is now a black rose

His time has past

But the question why then

He was so happy that day

What could have happened to cause that?

No one knows for sure

He just collapsed

I will never look at life

The same way again

Time can stop at anytime

For your life to end

It heart breaking

Enough to put someone over

The edge

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

All these people

Their rumors to him

Everyone thinks different things and it

Hurts the loved ones

Some people laugh at it

Like it some cruel joke

No it really

Everything happened

When you laugh at some death

You are causing one of their loved one more pain

Don’t ever think you can pass people by

The world becomes a has

When you lose some one

And it can happen in an instant

…….And life is over

Reviews

[Mercedes]

Wow. What a poem. It's so emotional and raw. It tore my heart up as I read it. The pain you were feeling is so obvious as I read. And the statements in green really make the emotions stand out. This is so moving.

[Magdelena]

This brought tears to my eyes and I found myself shedding silent tears.. What a write!!! You have brought forth truth, feelings, pain, and moments of unrest on what we as people react to any kind of unpleasent news.. Well done my friend...


Mags xx