I thought That I knew better this time
Thought I WOULDn't falls so hard
however I have
Why?
What makes him so special?
Last time I end up with...
A broken Spirit
I thought I had learned
Boys lead to broken hearts
Am I ready?
Is he worth it? To get another heart broken?
Selfreflection on love and it's negative side like getting hurt. I like selfreflective writes such as this one, though I don't use to share many of them here, they're too personal, too banal in a way. Just things I scribble down somewhere and have a look at them now and then. ...
I can relate to the emotions and strain of thoughts in your writing though I think I discovered little mistakes, like fall s hard, just fall hard maybe? And endED (ended) up instead of just end because you obviously use a past tense.
Anyways, nice little write.
Selfreflection on love and it's negative side like getting hurt. I like selfreflective writes such as this one, though I don't use to share many of them here, they're too personal, too banal in a way. Just things I scribble down somewhere and have a look at them now and then. ...
I can relate to the emotions and strain of thoughts in your writing though I think I discovered little mistakes, like fall s hard, just fall hard maybe? And endED (ended) up instead of just end because you obviously use a past tense.
Anyways, nice little write.
The question of love. To fall into love or run?
"Am I ready?
Is he worth it? To get another heart broken?"
I tell the young people. Use your mind and don't follow your heart. The heart can trick you. Thank you Liz for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote