Move

Move

A Poem by Liz Alexander
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Spork

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Move

You are teasing me
Those silent glances in my direction
Give me hope that gets crushed quickly
By you once again
I wish I could carve my eyes out
With a spork
So I could never know
When you stare at me
While your with your girl friends
Put me out if my misery
Make your move or leave

Finished: Dec.10, 2012

© 2012 Liz Alexander


Author's Note

Liz Alexander
Inspired by: Silent man

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Some like to keep others on a string while doing as they please so they have something to come back to. That is when you have to get the scissors out and do it yourself.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Liz Alexander

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing
I like the ending of this poem. Not polite to be paying attention to another when you are with your girlfriend. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Liz Alexander

12 Years Ago

I could not find a good word to put there when I ment a group of girls but thank you for the review.

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In College. My major is Missions. Trying to pave my own way I love writing about wonders, romance, and God. more..

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