I'm free

dis thng..ws written at a very difficult tyme...nd..guess..what ur freee...:)

I feel awry,almost like i felt before,
I feel sad,terms acceptable no more,
I feel disdained,loved no more,
I feel sorry,for the world doesn't give a damn any more....

I wanna be free,free,free wanna live my life like I never did before,
I wanna be free from all this trouble,
 I wanna be free,free,freeee..!!

I'hve been so honest,but to no avail to you,
I'hd been so brilliant,not the case for you,
I had been so caring,never felt so ruthless before,
I am scared,don't wannna lose it no more!

I wanna be free,free free from all this trouble
FRee from life ,don't wanna carry on!

I felt sucidal,like I was no more,
I felt scornful,never felt so angry before,
I feel angry,atrocities all around,
I feel oppressed,don't wanna be pressed no more!

I wanna be free,free from all this anger,
the way the WORLD functions you self-supreme IDIOTIC MORONS!!!

I'm free,free from the land ,from the sea,the earth,the sky.I'm free..freee free..!!
No pain,love hope,sorrow coz I just wanna be free.
I'm free and troubled no more .
By the evils,the demons ,or the sea..coz..m fuc*** free...!!

I feel satisfied,self sufficient again,
I feel ,love springing through the gates of my head
I feel passion ,running thru my veins,
I feel positive,not disdained again!!

I'm free,free,free
I'm free,free,free and never looking back.
I'm free,come stand by me..coz I'm free

everybody has the right to live,die,laugh,cry,jump,lie,think,express,to share,to hear to be free,free,free!!!

*IF YOU WANT TO BE FREE COME STAND BESIDE ME"

Reviews

[Raef C. Boylan]

Very uplifting and positive. I did indeed want to stand beside the narrator at the end.
Nice work. Kind of lyrical.

p.s.
"I felt scornfull,never felt so angry before" [scornful]

[Katrina Mckeown]

Ok I'm Still Standing! Thanks for sharing, enjoyable poem to read!

[dev]

till date it's my most emotional..poem...