NOT WITH YOU

NOT WITH YOU

A Poem by iamcarolfierce

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Being NOT with you is the hardest part

Especially when i know that at any time

You would go again and leave me with

A broken heart

And though this had happened many times

I still think of NOT leaving you because

I know, i surely can't

I love you and you know that

And i still mean it like what i did from the start

And no matter how badly you messed up with me

Still, my heart will be yours and yours...

Only.

© 2011 iamcarolfierce


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This is lovely.. This is true love

Posted 11 Years Ago


iamcarolfierce

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for taking time to read and review this. Appreciate it. :)
This is very true! How often do we have to teach ourselves to let go and move on from broken romances, in order to rid ourselves of the undying hurt? You are getting better.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's okay I guess... though it's more prosaic than perhaps poetry should be: lack of flow, it's stiff.
If love is not mutual it is not love.
~SOUL LESS~

Posted 13 Years Ago



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iamcarolfierce
iamcarolfierce

MANILA, Philippines



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I used to have a great passion in writing before. Composed poems and songs, had written essays and stories. However, time made me a real bum. Vices and peers came and I forgot about writing. But no.. more..

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