HOW COULD YOU LIE?

Forgive me for this one. I just wanna let my emotions out. I can't write any rhyme, nor make it poetic.

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I've seen it

And it was the worst thing that I've ever saw

How could you do this?

How could you let me feel assured

That there is, and will be no one coming between us

But you did it!

Though you've never admit it

And it broke my heart

So broke that I can't cry anymore

Emotions have just died

All I can feel is that,

An excruciating pain is tearing me apart

I can't breath

I can't move

Everything feels so numb

So numb that I can't almost feel your love

Reviews

[KAREN]

This has pain, hurt and anger pouring from it. Love the ending!!!

[Worms]

wow, powerful emotions here and a beautiful explanation of the tearing feeling when you lose what you loved, amazing piece with beautiful flow to it
amazing job here