I STILL...

I STILL...

A Poem by iamcarolfierce

The feeling's still the same as before
Deep
True
Sincere
Seems like I had unlocked the door
Seems like the key to my heart
Still belongs to you

It had been months since I last saw you
But the pictures
The memories
The songs still reminded me of you

And those brought me back
To the place
To the time
When you're still nearly mine

Somehow I wish
I could bring back the time
Played my game really nice
Maybe I could somehow
Catch your heart through that


I admit I still feel the same
Deep
True
Sincere
Seems like I will never lock the door
The key will still be yours
'Cause I know I still belong to you

© 2011 iamcarolfierce


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Packed with sensibility and I like the repetition of deep true sincere to where it resonates in your mind.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful, breath taking, EXCELLENT write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


beautiful express but i sense a touch of sadness, well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is beautiful and sad. It made me feel the heartache.
You have talent.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 30, 2011
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iamcarolfierce
iamcarolfierce

MANILA, Philippines



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I used to have a great passion in writing before. Composed poems and songs, had written essays and stories. However, time made me a real bum. Vices and peers came and I forgot about writing. But no.. more..

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