Next to you

***

 

Seeing a couple in front of me

Made my heart broke in two

Cause together they’re seeing the sunset

Which I should also be doing next to you

 

I wonder where you are now.

Wonder what you are doing

I wonder who you are with

Hoping it was me who you’re thinking

 

I miss your touch,

Your eyes,

Your smile

I miss everything about you

Especially your lips close to mine

 

I just wish you’re here beside me

Holding my hand as the sun goes down

But I know there’s nothing left to do

Than to wish that I am next to you.

 

Author's Note

Have you ever wish that you're always next to the person you loved the most? :)

Reviews

[Karli]

awwww:/
this is so sweet, yet heartbreaking. Good job of getting the emotion out there!:)

[InkSlinger]

Absence really does make the heart grow fonder.. All the thing you want to say, to feel, to share.. only mean so much more when you finally come back together..
Nicely done!!

[E.H. Monroe]

its a young heart and a young break.
But trust me, even old people wish for this..
some more than others

[KAREN]

It's hard to want something and can't have it. Your emotions was excellent! Could feel the pain the longing!

[steph]

Aww.... That poem is so sweet.... I like the warm fuzzy feeling I get when I read it. I always wish I could have someone to feel that way for, but well, never mind. Great poem. Excellent

[Moflo]

Your rhymes are great in the first and last stanzas here. I like the break of meter in the middle for some seriousness. Nice poem.

[Stef Outsiders]

Yes very much so... beautiful and adorable poem! well done!