TELL ME I AM RIGHT!

TELL ME I AM RIGHT!

A Poem by iamcarolfierce
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To all who would take time to read this. I hope you guys could answer my question as well. Thank you.

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Is it right to get jealous over his past love?

 

To someone who he had kissed before?

To someone who he had higged tightly

and more?

 

To someone who had shared a big part to his life?

To someone who would have become his wife?

 

Can someone tell me

Getting jealous is right!

Can someone answer the questions

That kept me awake all night!

 

Is it right?

Tell me I am right!

 

 

© 2011 iamcarolfierce


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Who can say what is right or wrong you feel how you feel. Just know there are consequences to each choice we make, and we can chose to feel jealousy and we can chose to feel through it but if we allow it to roast it's head to our lover the consequence is usually them leaving us. So there is no right or wrong your justified with how you feel, the thing is what will you do about this feeling? Enjoyed the twisting write and I hope you sleep better tonight.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like your poem. the inner turmoil of the Relationship can often be hard....

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you everyone. Now I know what to do and I was wrong with what I have felt. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Remember, he has you NOW. That's all that matters.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Everyone is different but if you trust him and then there should be no reason to be jealous! at the end of the day he is with you now, not her!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh the green eyed monster called jealousy has come calling.. remember he kisses and hugs you now, and although he has made memories with her, they are just that.. memories that belong to him.. and in good time, those memories will begin to fade, replaced with the memories you will make with him.. Hold tight to the love he offers, and cherish the time you have been granted.. Live, learn and grow..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Can feel the pain. But if he loves you now and there is trust, then theres no need to be jealous. Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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iamcarolfierce
iamcarolfierce

MANILA, Philippines



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I used to have a great passion in writing before. Composed poems and songs, had written essays and stories. However, time made me a real bum. Vices and peers came and I forgot about writing. But no.. more..

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