HIS SMILE - THE BEST THING I'VE EVER SEEN

HIS SMILE - THE BEST THING I'VE EVER SEEN

A Poem by iamcarolfierce

His smile - the best thing that I’ve ever seen

It’s like seeing the sun brightly shining

It’s like hearing the angels singing

It’s like the most precious treasure ever been


So alluring, undeniably tempting

Whenever I see it, my heart just can’t stop its rapid beating

 

His smile- the best thing I’ve ever seen

One of the reasons why I keep on falling

Baby, I tell you there will be no room for regrets

Even all that is left for me to do is staring.

© 2014 iamcarolfierce


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Small yet entertaining, I have moments like this when you see a guy smile and its hard to look away when its so beautiful to look at... good!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet happy poem! Well written and a joy to read!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so sweet. I totally relate to this poem, it's simple but shows such deep feelings.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 4, 2011
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iamcarolfierce
iamcarolfierce

MANILA, Philippines



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I used to have a great passion in writing before. Composed poems and songs, had written essays and stories. However, time made me a real bum. Vices and peers came and I forgot about writing. But no.. more..

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