Speaking Telegraph (EDITED)

I dialed your number,
hoping that you'd answer fast
It rang once,
and then twice
Then I heard your sweet voice
through my line


My heart beat rapidly
I was very excited to talk to you!
Your voice soothed me
It was the sweetest melody

It was as if I was talking to an angel
I felt like floating
Distance had kept us apart
Yet, you seemed so near to me

I can't wait for this day to end,
so I can see you again!

Author's Note

I've just edited this one. Thank you for helping me. You know who you are. :)

Reviews

[Nobody.]

I like it. I tend to miss people....a lot. you wrote the feeling well.
cheers!

[kaylynnmelody♥]

Hearing the voice of someone you love is the best thing,ever, in my opinion. especially if you havent seen them in person for a long time. This poem was amazing. (:

[I-smile]

Wonder who was on the other line. =)

[InkSlinger]

oh the joys of love, the promise of another day, and the thrill of what will be... simple and sweet sentiment.. Nice job!

[Daniel Soloye]

amazing truely amazing loved it

[KAREN]

Beautiful, romantic, sweet and loving! Nice job, no, EXCELLENT job!!

[Worms]

I think that t is good
but the writing is a bit hard to see
that is my only complaint

[SpokenWord]

It is a good feeling when they call and words are actually exchanged. It is the wait that gets to me thou. Yellow letters on my monitor look like sun rays that I can't see, so I highlighted the text so I could see, LOL. I wonder, did you do that on purpose?

Good write :)

[mir]

Nicely expressed poem of your wanting to share your "Cloud Nine" experiences with the whole world! Good write!

[Stef Outsiders]

This is sweet and simply, whoever your character is waiting for sounds very smitten with the other person on the phone! bless...
well done!