LET THIS LOVE LAST

He made me feel like I am living in a fairytale

I am a princess,

a damsel in distress

And that he was my prince,

my knight in shining armor

Everything felt magically,

as love had visited me

For the first time in my life,

I have seen lots of beautiful things,

The stars are shining brightly,

the moon is dancing and smiling

All the fireflies are singing

I could clearly hear those sweet melodies

He kissed me, and it was the sweetest

Soft, smooth lips

Dazzling eyes like of the real prince

There is really nothing more to ask,

Than to let this love last

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

Oh this reminds me of the very first time I felt love's touch in my life. It is magical as you have described so perfectly above. You hit all the key factors from being treated like a princess to the night in shinning armer ending with the hope that the love lasts. Sweet yes but it is also nostalgic.

[reminder]

How wonderfully put. It is narrative and lyrical.

[mir]

This describes one of the best feelings that a person could ever have in their lifetime! ---It's such a FANTASTIC feeling that one never wants to let go of. Everyone who has felt love can relate to your beautiful poem. Very nice.