Nothin' abut a sweet piece of mem'ry

Nothin' abut a sweet piece of mem'ry

A Poem by iamcarolfierce

Though it's hard
Push harder to try
Forgettin' every fantasies that
Lives in your mind

Forget the smile
That once made up your day complete
Forget those dazzlin' eyes
and those silly heartbeats

Forget those soft, sweet lips
and all those silly temptations
Forget all the lies and all those
imaginations

And though it's hard
Push even harder to try
Forgettin' every fantasies that
Lives in your mind

And think about nothin'
except that he will be nothin' but a piece
of a sweet mem'ry.

© 2010 iamcarolfierce


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great work! I really liked the flow of this piece

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow guys , thank you for all the reviews. :)
your reviews made my day. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Beautiful!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes it's hard to forget! But sometimes it may be the best thing! Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Harsh words for someone to hear, but even harder to do. Forgetting a love pushing them out of your mind is just painful. Wonderful write, loved the images and expressions.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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iamcarolfierce
iamcarolfierce

MANILA, Philippines



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I used to have a great passion in writing before. Composed poems and songs, had written essays and stories. However, time made me a real bum. Vices and peers came and I forgot about writing. But no.. more..

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