Thy smile, thy voice, thy wholeness.

Thy smile, thy voice, thy wholeness.

A Poem by iamcarolfierce

Thy smile is a caffeine
that rushes into my blood
It made me yearn for more
Feels like I've never had enough
You're quiet addictive
Like a drugs out of sight

Thy voice is more than a
sweet melody
Like a harp being plucked by angels
Serene, harmonic, alluring

Thy wholeness welcomes me,
Like we've know each other for century
ignoring thy invitation never crossed my
mind
'Cause I am more the willing to
enter your life.

© 2010 iamcarolfierce


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this is simply amazing and you can feel this poem it is very strong

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a great poem. I loved how you used caffeine and drugs to express your love for him!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is truely sweet and I imagine anyone would love to hear and feel these words from someone. It sounds like a soulmate for sure. Great write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 4, 2010
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iamcarolfierce
iamcarolfierce

MANILA, Philippines



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I used to have a great passion in writing before. Composed poems and songs, had written essays and stories. However, time made me a real bum. Vices and peers came and I forgot about writing. But no.. more..

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