Darkness

So very dark...

I can't see

Anything

Anymore

I have been blinded

By this darkness

Inside me

I feel so helpless

Trapped

In this dark nightmare

Called my life

With no one who cares

No one to wake me

Only darkness

Only me

Reviews

[Sexy P3nguin]

Amazing job at this. You tookthis thing called life and changed it into well darness. You did it very well .
I love the line"Trape
In this dark nightmare
Called my life"

Amazing job

[Allmax]

We are thrown into the world completely alone, and we will leave it in the same manner. I like your ability to express yourself so clearly, and respect the fact that this poem has an openness to it which seems very honest. Very good job.