please dont cry

please dont cry

A Poem by EpicKizzy
"

my friends pain is my pain as well...

"

we sit in class

she explains her past

is it just me?

or is she blinded by--

a jackass

 

shes my friend

so how do i till her

that she should move on

--be 4 the end

 

i dont know what to say

i do know shes in love

i tell her it will be okaye

as i watch her fade away..

 

as i hope it wasnt a lie

i pry...

that yes everything

will be okaye

 

he makes her sad

he makes her cry

so im'a tell her..

move on and say -- goodbye

© 2010 EpicKizzy


Author's Note

EpicKizzy
maybe my advise is not good but i dont know wat to tell her... any ideas??

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Aww, I understand how you feel. Yay! been in your shoes once and yeah that's my very same question. What should I tell her? that made me also to write a poem. :D The poem for me is beautifully written. :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


it took some time but..she is now over him and sees it wasnt worth her time and tear=] thank u Scissorhands4eva

Posted 13 Years Ago


Tell her that he not worth it. That's she's much better then him...

You can't stop her from thinking of him... but,one day she'll realize she is. Promise.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 14, 2010
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EpicKizzy
EpicKizzy

you cant be mad at god and not believe in him at the same time.., Canada



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