AWAY

-i wrote this on my bathroom floor.........bleeding-

my life is slowly slipping away

i'm not sure what to do-

or say

Should I let it slip away

Or should i find a way to stay

What am I supposed to do-

What am I supposed to say

Am I just supposed to watch it slip

AWAY??

Author's Note

i hate haning on

Reviews

[Life Calling!!!]

Wow! 9 lines and the emotions of a lifetime! 'Profound' falls short in describing this piece! I'm so overwhelmed I don't know what to say! And each and every word you say is so true! I can feel with you....at some point in my life even I felt the same....but then I fought and now. like you can see, Life's Calling!!! Life calls, you know...when you think the end is here, try to look beyond the end....and you can see that there's always a lot more beyond....life is for living, dear....find a reason and you shall be able to live!

God Bless!

[barricade]

m no one to give u any suggestions...bt can feel the pain really well...i feel hw it is...if u hate hanging on...then jus let go...n if u reely want him back den be firm as a rock...without the pain, the tears...cos if ure meant to be...then u will be!
tk cre...
regards
barricade...

[rachel <3]

hanging on isnt living. i would know, i do this to myself eveyday. your poem rings true, short, but true. beautiful piece, heartrenchingly beautiful.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

If you are having troubles hanging on then sometimes we need to explore the reasons we feel this way.. I have been depressed in my lifetime (I didn't hurt myself that way); there comes a time where we need to put out our hand, seek higher assistance like counselling to discuss those issues and then find a way to get stronger and believe that life can be better... this is a hard road but there is light you just have to want to find it for yourself.. please seek assistance as everyone is special my friend... thank you for sharing your emotions as painful as they are... this sounds like a cry for help.. I am willing to be your friend.