Hate(My Declaration of Retaliation)

 

Hate (My Declaration of Retaliation)

It flows through it runs its coarse

causing you to feel no remorse

the things you've said you know you've done

your sick emotions your twisted fun

it is a poison that consume you

the cloud of darkness that surrounds the fool

you're just another pawn in its sick game

you're nothing different you're all the same

The hate that makes you

it will soon break you

leave you tathered torn in two

it will kill you when its through

its not on your side

dont try to hide

this emotion might never subside

It's might is strong its goal is none

it just makes you hate everyone

you dont want it and you fight

try as you will beg as you might

all who resist have fought their final fight

the hate will turn you against your self

The hate that makes you

it will soon break you

leave you tathered torn in two

it will kill you when its through

its not on your side

dont try to hide

this emotion might never subside

Now you hate yourself you inflict pain

on your own body are you insane?

you've lost it all

now you fall

into the pit of sorrows the life of none

all in all id say your done

The hate that makes you

it will soon break you

leave you tathered torn in two

it will kill you when its through

its not on your side

dont try to hide

this emotion might never subside

Harmful it may be

i've come to see

this emotion

is a result of devotion

to a person you loved and cared for

who've turned traitor they arent there anymore

the hate can kill

i wonder can it heal?

The hate that makes you

it will soon break you

leave you tathered torn in two

it will kill you when its through

its not on your side

dont try to hide

this emotion might never subside

Can this hate cure

or will the heart endure

the hardest most vile of pains

a result of persistent which was in vain

finding hate harder and harder to ignore

to a point you dont care anymore

now you're numb

all because you were so dumb

The hate that makes you

it will soon break you

leave you tathered torn in two

it will kill you when its through

its not on your side

dont try to hide

this emotion might never subside

Farewell to your happiness and being content

I sincerely hope this was your intent...

 

by:Bryan Wider

 

Reviews

[Runa]

Very shaking, I swear I could feel the hate! This was well-written, I'm glad I read it.

[Yaooooooo]

Overall a good read, keep up the good work and feel free to send me a request when ever..
One!

[JC Fox]

This was a powerful piece and alas I have fallen prey to hate as well, but it was usually brought on by individuals that squash my creativeness. Great piece I loved the flow and rhyme.