Candy Coated lies

You told me a secret

And I believed it

The lies that you fed me

I tried to denie them

But they were oh so sweet

Each one my own little treat

The were candy coated and sugary

The feeling was so splended

But you didn't tell me

That now each decision I make

Is life or death

Author's Note

Ha ha this one sucks! I just made it up randomly....

Reviews

[ABBY]

i have ben in this same situation.............................................................................

[Karissa.]

I agree with the person below me. Play with your words a little more and your poem would reach new levels. Great job though.
~Karissa

[Phoenix]

It doesn't suck, it's pretty good, but rhymming would make it better.