The sky is pretty

The sky is pretty

A Poem by Rose
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I've always wanted to do a basic poem; inspired by Bianca Steward's "Drown"

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I like looking at the sky

staring deep into the abyss,

and sometimes,

only sometimes,

I can see the whole word spin past me

so fast.

I think it left me behind.

© 2011 Rose


Author's Note

Rose
Literally wrote it in under a minute. But Bianca Steward's "Drown" was inspiring, and this describes -very basically- what I feel.
Also, I wanted to experiment with enjambment.

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Added on June 23, 2011
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Rose
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