Take me now

My feelings right now, I wish someone would notice me.

I feel my eyes begin to wet,

I feel the coldness take my body,

And yet I cannot bring my self,

To cry,

Or live,

Or die.

I'm all alone,

I want some comfort,

I want you to be near me;

To tell me that everything will be okay,

For somebody to hear me.

My eyes close,

I want to die.

I need to get some attention.

This loneliness is a silent killer,

It drives us all insane.

My wrist cry out to be cut,

I know I must resist.

The silent cry of my bedside scissors,

Is echoing through my ears.

Reviews

[sammyj]

very deep

[Kanani]

Oh. My. Gosh.
This poem is so powerful, so heart wrenching. You are truly talented.

[Wolfwind Words]

This piece echoes with the emptiness. It's a feeling that comes across in crystaline quality with your words and how life around you effect them.

I like you lines about loneliness being a silent killer... If it is... Then I guess i've got nine lives! ;) Or... maybe i've fallen into that insanity and I simply just have failed to realize it.

A great poem! Full of raw emotional power!

Wolfie