The Masque

The Masque

A Poem by Erin

Come closer

See the facade

See the porcelain break.
Shards blind the already blind;
The sharp prettyness cuts deep.
Deep.
Deep, to the core, the center, the truth.
The ugly behind the astounding mask.
The true Dorian Gray behind the portrait
Lurking in your attic.
Daring to mock
Daring to smock
In the face of

Utter destruction.
But the creamy lids close;
To go through the curtain
To a place I can be happy.
Masterpiece Theatre of the mind--
Most pleasing.
Most ficticious.
Memories,
Past

      And

            Present.

© 2008 Erin


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Too many hide behind masks and get exposed in time...

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like this one, very well written.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I wonder about the line "Daring to smock." What was the reasoning behind this? A smock is a sort of gabardine work apron. Was it simply a word to rhyme with mock? Otherwise, I thought the poem was well thought-out and poignant to the overall subject.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Erin
Erin

Where the Wind Comes Sweeping Down The Plain, OK



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