Here's to:

Here's to:

A Poem by Erin
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I wrote this about five minutes ago, so enjoy:

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Heres to:

Heat-filled spaces

Rough and scratched faces

Sweat and skin

Lose and win

The come and go

Ebb and flow

Entwined Hands
Dangerous Plans

Love and Hate

Destroy and Create.
Here’s to you

and

Here’s to me.

 

© 2008 Erin


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here's to passion? lol! that was very vivid...great job

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

wow. that was really good. it was short and quick, but it left a effect. good stuff.

Posted 17 Years Ago


This epitomizes the strength behind simplicity. Very Dorothy Parker-ish. I love it!

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Where the Wind Comes Sweeping Down The Plain, OK



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