I Wonder

Sometimes I begin to wonder

about the life we live

the people in it

what makes us who we are

why do we do what we do

Sometimes I begin to wonder

what each of us is thinking

what does it mean

that look in your eye

the spring in your step

what are you thinking

in the chambers of your mind

Sometimes I begin to wonder

what it is we see in ourselves

do you see the sparkle of your smile

the shine in your hair

do you see the kindness of your touch

or the calm in your voice

do you see what makes you, you

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong poem. The desire of the poem are the questions we want answers and hopefully the answers are positive and true.
"Sometimes I begin to wonder
what each of us is thinking
what does it mean
that look in your eye
the spring in your step
what are you thinking
in the chambers of your mind"
A outstanding poem. I like how you ended the poem. Thank you.
Coyote