was it all a lie

inside she's crying
inside she's dying
the look on her face
explains her case
her love was strong
was she wrong
she loves him like crazy
does he feel the same
was it all a game
she can take no more
her blood will pour
little red drops in the snow
a bloody snow angel

Reviews

[Awkward]

Wow knowing what this poem is about just made it that much more real for me! I felt cold and I could see the blood! Wow! I love this! Good job!

[northern monkey]

Interesting expression of raw emotions. Suggest reviewing other people's stuff on here for inspiration, influences and mutual benefits.