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yeah I've been through
hell and back
but hey I bounced back
look at me now
i made a vow
to never look back
why would i
the past is whack

shoo fly
don't bother me
i'm flying high
up in the sky
thank the Lord
the demons are gone

now I'm living life
like each day were my last

Author's Note

hmm my poems are getting bad and I don't like them :/

Reviews

[Amy]

I absolutely love the youthful...looking forward to life attitude that this poem emmits. Nice work...:)

[GamingGal]

Pros: This poem isn't bad! It has a....devil-may-care kind of feel to it. A free spirited kind of thing. The lines blend together well, and your rhyme scheme helps carry everything along. I like the emotion I feel from it, that attitude I mentioned earlier.

Cons: None

Overall: I enjoyed this poem, and you should, too :)

i liked it. it felt really expressive. nice.

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

I really liked the originality emitting from this poem you can tell its written by someone looking to the future and leaving the past in the past I wouldn't put yourself down its got a great flow and a lot of people will relate so well done its a great read my only criticism is that I wish it was longer