Hiding

Hiding

It is what I have been pushed to

Not understanding

It is all that comes to my thick head

Just breaking

It is the only thing that keeps me dying.

Reviews

[C.C. Marx]

Brief but to the point...good job :)

[Perfect Mistake]

SHort but very effective, i liked this. Good work :3

[forevermore1218]

with five lines of gold
bitterness flows within it
you have made beauty

hehe haiku for you :)
love this poem dude!!!

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Short and bitter-very good.

[K-mo]

this is really good, can really feel your emotion, nicely done!

[Chesney W.]

short.. sad ... but an excellent piece.... hiding, misundersanding, and breaking,, a lovely write!... keep writing, your good!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe, this was sad, but I can relate. Hiding is normally a bad thing because you are just keeping everything locked up. That could be bad for a person. Thanks for sharing.