Mirror, I Blame You

Mirror, I Blame You

A Poem by I Don't Care If You're Contagious

Mirror on the wall
Why do people fall
Why do they fall in love
I blame you Mirror
Blame you for making girls hurt
Why must you show them a false image
When I look at a girl
She is beautiful With Her Flaws
When you show the girls themselves
All they see is the flaws
The unimportant things
I blame you, yes you mirror
For every girl who has insecurities. 

© 2012 I Don't Care If You're Contagious


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this is beautiful....girls should realize that no one is perfect and instead of trying so hard to be someone else we should just be ourselves and proudly love it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Incredible, Zagon. Really intense and wonderful. You could hear the stark beauty of it pulsating through your veins.
It's a reach out to every girl that looks in the mirror and thinks they are imperfect. I'm imperfect too.

Thanks for the boost, Zagon.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is amazing. I loved every sentence of this poem. Its short and simple yet gets the point through very well. Amazing job :3

Posted 12 Years Ago


There is so much to this poem. So much. Your ability to write is incredible. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is much truth to this, but I agree with the other comment that guys surely have insecurites as well. But I am assuming for this poem you specifically wanted to direct it that way.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful. But I know girls aren't the only ones that see their flaws in the mirror. Guys feel self-conscious sometimes too. Good write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I Don't Care If You're Contagious
I Don't Care If You're Contagious

Rockey Hill, NJ



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My name is Zagon Smith. I just moved away from California. Now I am stuck in an awkward small town in the small state of New Jersey. I hate hearing all of these accents everywhere I go. My birthday.. more..

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