I Wish Her

I wish her a beautiful life

as I sit here and destroy mine.

I wish that she will not cry

as I sit here bleeding, waiting to die.

I wish her all of the happy times

as I sit here smoking my last ounce of life.

I wish she will never forget me

as I lie here, ever so desperately.

Reviews

[Winslow Des Totes]

Sometimes wishing is all we have left after losing someone we care for, at least you were smart enough to make it count in this very raw and wonderfully expressed piece. Good job and I hope you find what you are looking for, but in the mean time I hope you keep writing. :)

[this close]

I'm here for you..

[Deandra Dawn]

Beautifully written....so much emotion. Nicely done

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

This romantic and sad, but simple and powerful. Beautiful.

[Roe]

Sad write very deep and emotional.

[Angelic Surrender]

Very deep write. Sad feelings indeed. If you ever need a friend to talk to, I'm happy to listen. Great piece.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a really deep write. I'm sorry you are having these feelings. I hope you feel better. Thank you for sharing.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Deeeeeep. Very emotional. I can really feel how your feeling. This poem kind of hits home for me. Thank you for sharing.

[Kiara]

Are you okay?