Do Not Die

To live

Or die.

To keep laughing

Or cry.

Do not die

if for any reason let it be me

Do not cry

If for any reason let it be I.

Reviews

[LegitFlyingTaco]

Short but right to the point. It explains how i feel sometimes. Put on a fake smile? Or, let my true emotions show. Carry on? Or, give up. Live another day? Or say hello to my grave. Sometimes i don't even know what keeps me going. And the second part of this poem explains these two horrendous character traits that i have, Being extremely caring and extremely tolerant. I always go out of my way to help people no matter how darn stubborn and annoying they may be. Ugh. Anyway, wonderful write. Well done. (:

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Fantastic- but confusion lingers. Leaves the reader wary, wanting to know more. Great job