Dropping Down, Please Do Not Give Up

I can see you have been hurt

I can sense all of their words

Do not let them ruin your life

Expectly in your own eyes.

Dropping down low

Please do not give up hope

If need to be I will let you go

Just do not give up your dreams and hope.

I could tell you everything 

It wouldn't matter if I do anything

For all those liars and fakes

they have ruined our fate.

Dropping down faster

Please do not give up on laughter

If need to be I will be your joker

Please do not give up on laughter.

I could be everything you need

the missing puzzle piece

the one thing you need to feel complete

So why is it that you cannot take the leap?

Dropping down at the speed of light

Please do not give up on your happy ever after

If need to be I will be your happy ever after

Please do not give up on our happy ever after.

Reviews

[PaperLife]

Ah such a feeling that just screams ever so gently from this poem! The form is excellent, kind of confuses the brain and makes the feelings spoken here more real.

Your selflessness here is quite evident but also your longing and desire. You've created a masterpiece with a turmoil of feelings that are so wide and varied you've found a way to pinpoint it artistically. The feelings fall all around the poem. Softly and gently. There's a world here that utters strangely something both terrifying and thrilling. A world brought only by experience and the unexperienced. You don't live in the black or the white, you live in the middle, with a proper view to the world. Well done.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Keep it up bro. This is just great

[Kiara]

This is really sweet :)