To...Or...

here

or  there?

then

or now?

the past

or the future?

A call

or  text?

To watch

or learn?

To be there

or leave?

To cry

or bleed?

To stumble

or fall?

To not try

or lose it all?

Why

or  how?

Ashamed

or proud?

To fly

or fight?

To right a wrong

or wrong a right?

To turn left

or go straight?

To ask you out

or wait?

Reviews

[Thorne_Alexandra]

I am just getting back into writing after taking a long break. I think I have been over-thinking my poetry. I have read quite a few of your pieces and I love how they seem so effortless. That is the mark of a great artist. I look forward to reading more from you.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

A very good write. An honest poem-i can tell you put effort into this. Excellent.

[Your Perfect Disaster]

Very creative. It draws the reader in really close. The last two lines left the reader hanging and wondering. Nice job. The way it was set up made it flow really well and pause every so often to ponder over the questions being asked. Nice write.

[Alexa Tasch]

wow really liked this. at first with "Here or there" and "Then or now", I thought it was going to be boring, but in the end it was really creative and neat. Great work!

[is death]

this was actually fantastic. the format you wrote it in was creative and different. good write x