That Has Captured Me

I need to figure out

How I got this way

I am going to scream my lungs out

Why can't I find my way?

Just breathe your soul into me

So I can live for you

You do not live as if you were me

It would take myself to be you.

Wonder why the sky is so blue

or the grass is so green

With the sun's shine yellow

But clouds covering the light.

Why is it that I need help

From someone who has had enough

Run away just run

Before you are caught in the same trap

That has captured me.

Reviews

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

This is so good. It really touches my heart. I feel your pain. Excellent. Just great.

[Your Perfect Disaster]

Very nice rhythm and flow to the piece. Again this poem sounds like it could be a song. Wonderful write. Just know that you are very talented.

[is death]

i liked it a lot and i could relate and all that junk. awesome poem x