To be Abandoned

Shattered pieces on the ground

Pieces that stick out from the crowd

These are broken 

They were broken from me.

All of the water in the river

Is only really tears

I have cried them

Over many, many years.

To be abandon

So alone and hurt

No one knows this pain

that is bitter like dirt.

Which way should I take

I would rather not be lost

I wish not to break

I do not want to loose you.

Reviews

[Your Perfect Disaster]

This is a very depressing poems but you really seemed readily able to depict the way you feel not just on feelings, but on thoughts as well, if that makes sense. Nice write.

[Rosa Lee]

I like the poem, the words are really deep and captavating.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

I love this. I can see a potential song here. The lyrics are so sincere and true. Very good.