Try It Once

For my dad. I will find you if you try to beat Mom one more time. We left to get away from you. Stay away from us.

Go tell them I left you

Tell the world I am a terrible son

There was nothing anyone could do

To change what you have done.

Tell the universe how you didn't mean it

Go and find us I dare you to

There was the marks on her you piece of s**t

Everyone hates you.

Touch her one more time

Just look at her once

Then your life will end at mine

I will never give up on killing you so try it once.

Author's Note

I'm new at this writing thing, please do not be too harsh...

Reviews

[Your Perfect Disaster]

The deep hateful emotion in this write really takes the reader on a trip. It's like we're all feeling and being immersed in the same anger, pain, hate, hurt, that you are. The way the write was set up was beautiful and really added to the piece. Nice write.

[Raya Avans]

This was a very powerful piece about a sensitive subject, and I can relate. I'm not sure anyone could be harsh about this piece, it is once again well written and expresses your feelings and animosity towards your dad, while the circumstances it is under aren't, this poem is beautiful and I much enjoyed the read. thank you, so glad you and your mother got away from that, well done

raya