Rocky Hill

my first poem since the move

From sun and beach

to weird new faces to meet.

So why did we have to move?

Mom was being beat by dad

No one knows were we went 

gone and distant.

It is such a rocky road

Funny that we are in Rocky Hill.

Why can't I make new friends

Or maybe find the one?

Someone cute

Maybe with a nice smile

that makes me want her more and more in awhile.

Maybe a girl who likes Pierce The Veil

oh that would bring my soul back from hell.

It would be perfect i can see it now

all I have left to do is find her in the world's crowd.

Reviews

[LegitFlyingTaco]

From the beginning, i can definitely relate. Having to move from place to place every year really sucks. Especially having to make new friends all over again and being in a place that isn't really your scene. But anyway, i love how it ends, having hope in finding someone out there that is just right for you. Very nice write. Well done. (:

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Through this whole thing, I can just feel how you're feeling. I love how you tell the story, explaining everything. No questions here. Has the information of a novel, but the flow and elegance of a poem. Fantastic.

[Your Perfect Disaster]

I have several friends who have moved all over hell and back and it truly IS hard. I think you thickly put your emotions into this and it show. Nice write.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good write. It's hard to adjust to a new place quickly. New Jersey is boring. Trust me. I've lived here for 19 years. Atlantic City is the only place that's really awesome in Jersey...but I hope you adjust.