Introduction

The introduction of the main character(Silver Paulson) and her life

 

    My name is Silver Paulson,

 

         Im a 14 year old girl from Tallahassee, Fl. My parents were going through some relationship trouble since I was 3 and now they've been divorced for 4 years, and im overly happy about it. Right now my mom is a single mother raising 4 kids. From day 1 I wasnt a normal kid, I unerstood things that normal 14 year olds wouldnt. My family has been suffering from bad money management and lack. To stay positive I just see the hard times as things that will prepare me to be humble in the future. My brothers and sister have jobs ( at Burger King and Papa Johns lol)and bring money into the house, but i cant because im too young and thats what i want to change.  Most kids just go through there elementary,middle,and high schools years and head out , I want to help my family and make a change.I've also always wanted a person that would be by my side and could help me through my rough times, somebody i could go through everything with. You might say thats what best friends are for but, in my case there not. I know high school drama is bad, im having enough trouble with middle school. As people say "lifes to short make the best of it". So im on a hopefully short journey to find love,purpose,and my passion. Welcome to my world=)

Author's Note

Give me sum feedback pplz. Is it good?? Too boring?? Does it need more info??

Reviews

[Blue Sky]

Does it really take a short journey to find

love, purpose,and passion

most people take a life time to find all that...

I found it a tad dull, and writing it in first person narrator
makes it all the more boring, make it more lively, give the 14 year old more lively
ie..what she looks like and what she likes, and/or what does she like to do most of the time/most of the 14 years of her life. What makes her not to be a not so normal 14 year old, and explain a bit more why she is overly happy about her parents being divorced. Did the presence of her dad make her miserable or what? You to reveal more, as this is more general, other than that I thought it was a good start, what are you trying to tell the audience/readers in this part...tell us...Keep up the good start otherwise!