Poem 3.15

Foolish I was,  to have

looked in the mirror of your soul

dove into your core  

swayed into your sweet song

 

Foolish I was, to have  

made mine self  a crystalline

let you conquered my domain

allowed  you to marry my mind

 

Now,  all that foolishness

all that absurdities of mine

are bringing me back on the brink

on the brink of endless darkness

 

Foolish I was, to have

once more believed

in Odysseus and Penelope

 

            I forgot to remember 

            that love --

            Love seldom stays.

Reviews

[Androglossia]

Your words here flow like a waterfall over steep rocks. It's an endless cycle, isn't it Belle?

[Sami Khalil]

I forgot to remember

that love - -

Love seldom stays.



Wow. A most wonderful write full of simplicity but deep hidden feelings of regret and realizations about life and love mixed with the experience of the writer that transcends tales and legends of old times . I love the honesty in this one and the cascading thoughts of simple remorse. I think Miss Belle you are at the brink of greatness...:)

[Belle]

Sami my friend, I always treasure every review from you and I know that you know it. Thank you again for being here.

[Sami Khalil]

I do know. You are always welcome... My pleasure...:)

[MOON]

Poignant beautiful write conveying love and loss emotion so perfectly.

[Belle]

Thank you Moon for the read.