September Moon

You.

Yes it is you

Now in unhidden view

In this silent untidy night

Dare I say, 

you are the only light--

Author's Note

Reviews

[Caradoc]

I was going to add this to my favorites and then I realized I had already done that.

This piece is priceless. Yes, the author is talking to the moon it seems, but then there's so much more...it's intensity in the words you have here. It reminds me of a Disney movie I saw, called "The Princess and the Frog". In it is a firefly that is in love with a bright star in the night sky that he calls Evangeline. This poem could be that firefly talking to Evangeline.

Or any other person in love talking to their one and only.

The fact that my six year anniversary is this September only makes me love this poem more.

Thank you for writing it.

-Caradoc

[Wondering Mind]

ooo...intense!!!

[James Hanna-Magill]

Dear Belle

Beethoven and his moonlight Sonata.

I play it on my piano

September and October moons are the only way to play


James

[Belle]

It is overwhelming to know that Mr. James. Of all the mnth, it is September that gives me the most gleeson. I wonder the reason why September and October the only months to play.

[James Hanna-Magill]

Dear Belle

Because they match.

They are the first two months of a happy autumn.

Winter follows.

Then the Spring.

Then the Summer.

But moonlight lingers in between all.

Be it moons or sonatas.

James

[Sir Joe]

This is a very very short creation, but it's impact is BOOOOM! It's full of passion and expression.
I need not say more about the greatness of your poesy, big sister. It is great as the poet behind it.
My deepest regards to you, my sister.



- sir joe

[Acer]

I really don't know what to say, but i loved it much than my own poems indeed. It's a new flash you know. I didn't see such kind of words, beautiful. you've got some talent i's say. As i love to read or write short poerty's, but you one;s are much powerful than mine indeed. I loved it. Now, i'm quite confused that m'i gonna fan of you.

[Chris]

It drew then held me and after reading The flavor was of love.

[Dhaye]

So cool! I like this short piece...and the music of Beethoven. You're great!

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Again nice + beautiful......but too short....

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Sweet!

[Daniel Eckert]

Short and sweet, very well done.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"in this silent untidy night"

very cool line...

i see a person coming out of his shell...and the speaker realizes there is the chance to shine within his light of love.

ah that moon..

i like the spacing on this.

jacob