Just from a touch.

Just from a touch.

A Poem by i.am.the.sun.

just from a touch
i can imagine your individual hairs 
that used to pass through my fingers
one by one
as i played endlessly with them.
i can see you.

just from a touch
i remember how well my chin would fit on your shoulder
and i can smell your perfume
so faintly
like a piano key held for so long
that you're not sure if it's still singing.

just from a touch
i remember all those things you said to me
in whispers and excited yells
word by word
like i'm rereading a book
because it was too good to end.

just from a touch
i remember your skin against my lips
and how your porcelain wrists
tasted so cold
like melted snow
next to the hot blood in your veins.

just from a touch
you set all my senses ablaze
but the one thing i can't know
just from a touch
is how you feel
towards it.

© 2011 i.am.the.sun.


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"just from a touch
i can imagine your individual hairs
that used to pass through my fingers
one by one
as i played endlessly with them.
i can see you."

wow....i love the emotion of that moment !!!!


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"i remember your skin against my lips
and how your porcelain wrists
tasted so cold
like melted snow
next to the hot blood in your veins."

I love it as a whole but man this stanza is perfect :) xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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