We were giants.

We were giants.

A Poem by i.am.the.sun.
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a line in someone`s poem i heard the other day struck me and i came up with this idea.

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sun setting

touching tops

of mountains.

Their shadows

Stretching

Miles longer than they are tall.

Do you remember

When we were in love

With laughing?

Both giddy

And dancing

tip toe

On tops of sleeping titans.

We were so young.

Watching our shadows stretch

Across the valley floor,

We danced

And sung songs

And drank up the sun til drunk.

We didn’t care,

We were giants.

© 2011 i.am.the.sun.


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Beautifully nostalgic and perfectly picturesque. You paint a better picture with your words than any artist could with all pigments imaginable. You are a master of words, my friend.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Burnaby, Thugz mansion, Canada



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