-onic.

-onic.

A Poem by i.am.the.sun.
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i tried to rhyme as many words as i could with the sound "-onic" in them just to see if i could. idea from Lowesy.

"
Drinking this bubonic tonic
with sonic running through my veins,
making these feelings seem platonic
and the world a bit brighter and better
with these quadraphonic sounds
and with these hydroponic pounds
of this atomic chronic 
i'm not so shallow and bitter.

every sound electronic,
and made monophonic,
the dances moves suffer,
all anamatronic
until that iconic bass drop
starts attacking tectonics 
with so much Napoleonic rage,  
it moves these symphonics
to super, hyper, ultrasonic.

johnny mnuemonic's
not just hooked on phonics anymore,
but instead he's a supersonic supernova
among the stars a Casanova
exploding with the  
sounds of natures conics
that would make pythagoras proud,
the demonic harmonics echo behind him
like a shadow fading as the sun goes down.

© 2012 i.am.the.sun.


Author's Note

i.am.the.sun.
some something really short where i tried to rhyme as much "-onic" words as i could. idea from Lowesy.
no, i dont do anything mentioned above other than drink my face off occasionally. okay, like once or twice a week. fine, maybe thrice a week.

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hahahaha ah mate, we should make this some kind of challenge, see how many ridiculous words we can rhyme and try and make sense of it!
funny though, congrats, glad I inspired you! :D

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Posted 13 Years Ago


Well if it's beer aren't the hops and barley considered fiber ??? lol.. I think it is a fun write and interesting.. A chronic atomic hit for me lol :P xxx

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Posted 13 Years Ago



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