Alpine

Alpine

A Poem by i.am.the.sun.
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started this while i was still trying to get out of my writers block thing. i'm not sure if it's worked, but either way, if i sit down with something long enough it normally turns out okay.

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I want to bottle this air just for you
I wish I could wrap it up and bring it back!
If I could hold my breath long enough this would be easier.
So I think you should just come with me next time
So I can kiss you

I wish you could feel this breeze
I wish you could come above the clouds!
If I had a fan just gentle enough then maybe I could show you.
Until then I think you should just come with me
So I can brush my fingers through your hair.

I wish you could see these flowers
I wish you could see the colours!
If I could show you the shades of your eyes maybe then you'd see
So next time I think you should just follow me
And we can smell the same flowers together

I wish you could feel these hands,
I wish you could feel these lips!
If I could place a kiss on your cheek and my hands on your hips
Maybe i wouldn't have to ask you to follow me
And we could smell the same flowers together
And roll around in the same grass
Forever.

© 2011 i.am.the.sun.


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that's love-lettering at its finest


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is absolutely beautiful! I was smiling as I read and OOhhMmyy if someone actually recited this for me I would be in a puddle, I love every single line! ;w;

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is romantic and passionate..and she'd have to be a fool to say no to a plea like this.. :)xx I wish...she says yes to go with you :) xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 16, 2011
Last Updated on March 21, 2011
Tags: love, longing, romance, wanting, needing, asking, alpine, amor

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i.am.the.sun.
i.am.the.sun.

Burnaby, Thugz mansion, Canada



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