Hey Doc...

hey doc,
im here because i was told to come see you.
i dont think i need to see a shrink
but my wife told me to last year.
i didnt pay attention to her at first,
you would have known, 
if i did, i'd have been here sooner.
then others started saying i should go,
just go. 
they'd turn their heads and just mouth it to me.
go.
go...
for a while i thought they were the crazy ones,
they didnt remember doing anything like that when i asked them.
then, after my wife left, well... she didnt leave,
shes still in bed, i dont go in there anymore, she just stays there and i sleep on the couch. 
like i was saying, 
after my wife left, about 3 months ago, they started coming to my house and telling me, people i'd never seen before, in my windows.
go...
is all they would say. when i lifted the window to tell them to 
go 
away and leave me alone, they were quicker than me. they were nowhere to be seen! once i did see some bushes wrustling, thats where they must have ran. 
needless to say, i got scared, so i called the police and asked them to watch my house for me while i slept.
they said they didnt see a 
thing.
i said we need to hire better cops, 
because i saw them, more of them. even in the windows of the police cars. 
as you can imagine, mr... schedwick? 
i've lost my glasses for a while now, its hard to read but i think thats what it says on your card here. they didnt like me much, so when i called them again and asked for them to watch me again they hung up on me. 
but before i put the receiver down i heard it. i HEARD it. 
go...
through the dead dial tone of the receiver it entered my ear and sent shivers down my spine.
thats when i considered listening to what everyone was saying.
but before i called you, i wanted to ask my wife. so i went into our bedroom and she was still there, still where i left her. i told her everything that had been going on, and she turned her head with more ease than you think a 3 month corpse would have, and through a gaping mouth said the same as the rest. 
go...
but it wasnt the same, it didnt sound like what i imagined the others would sound like if i heard them. it was a howl. she howled at me to go see you.
so i phoned.
you told me to come by for a one hour session with a written piece on why i was there. so i started this right then and there. i finished it later that night.
you're probobly going to read this over and over, not even paying attention to what it says, just taking up time so you can tell me to come back again.
just for my money.
you wont tell me im crazy.
if things go like they have been, you'll probably just stand up from behind your desk and tell me to go.
go...

Reviews

[Ben Taylor]

Nice. I love the progression; it gets stranger and stranger and the climax is really when it is confirmed that the wife is just a corpse. This was a very captivating read :) The lack of capitalization also helped give it the "handwritten" feel you were going for.

[MandaBear]

interesting :)

[Lily Mae]

I'm telling you to go...lol.. Great imaginative write...well at least I hope it is.. Otherwise you have allot of air freshener's in your house lol..and don't get me going on the bed ...yuck.. ;) Love it...its crazy, funny, great...!! xx

[Lowesy]

.........................................ok

[i.am.the.sun.]

*evil cackle*