Our Neverland.

you told me to look for you
underneath that star
that one we found that night
when we stayed up for so long
we fell asleep together forever
at first sight 
of first light

i'm alone now
and watch the barren sky
im looking for our neverland
our island 
shining in the sky
where time stands still
and together forever we'll stand
the space between our toes
filled with soft white sand

Reviews

[Casey Dusek]

I like the idea of Neverland in this poem, it's broad, but allows the reader the oppurtunity to create their "neverland" along with your writing. Bravo :)