And Then There Was Nothing

And Then There Was Nothing

A Poem by hypochondrita
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                                          You've got all the time in your hands
                                                       Until you don't
                                          And I know this is one of those quotes
                                              That makes your irony groan
                              Really? You've got something until it's no longer there?
                                           That's plain logic all minds share
                                    Well, then what's so special about this one?
                                   When it proves itself, you're completely gone
                                                  Game over, my friend
                                               You never stood a chance
                    We as humans never really learn how to value this side of the fence
                                              But I guess It's not that bad
                            The illusion of death's tardiness will keep away the sad
                                         And does it really matter after all?
                                               Is wasting really a waste...
                                       If you never realise it within your days?
                        Sounds like to me its relevance only depends of conscious regret
                                     F#ck. Then I better get this out of my head...

© 2017 hypochondrita


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I like the words and I agree.
" You've got all the time in your hands
Until you don't
And I know this is one of those quotes
That makes your irony groan"
The above lines. Truer than true. Enjoy today, maybe we won't have a tomorrow? Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very creative and relatable and strong. You have a typo in line 13 . Re read it and you'll see it. F&@!?$# great.

Posted 7 Years Ago


hypochondrita

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the kind words and the heads up! Really appreciate it.
This is a beautiful piece that allows one to think of life and to remember that time waits on no one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


soul searching ,just live and enjoy life
tomorrow will come and bring what it will

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on March 29, 2017
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Tags: time, poetry, personal, think, life, death


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