3AM I'm sick again

A Poem by hypochondrita

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My skepticism won't let me see

Improvement is still nothing but a rumor to me

Can't see any change ahead

Though that's so illogical I leave it unsaid

The arrow of time interferes all around

Modifying the world of RIGHT NOW

Never the same it was a second ago

New planets emerging in a row

Abandoning the same old kid

Trying to figure out how to not feel sick

About never having a chance to prepare

For this entropy warfare

How come I can't seem to understand the deal

Progress just seems surreal

Growth refuses to seem concret in my mind

A hope I'll never find

People don't really change, do they?

Stuck in a portrait

Available for a paint over

But with the original image always undercover

Oh how I wish to prove myself wrong one day

But for now my tears seem to flood all the good pathways...

© 2017 hypochondrita

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Kimiko Watson

This has touched my heart as it applies to my own life. You are a great writing. Keep writing. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

littlemisspoop

beautifully written. Loved every bit of it. Keep writing!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago

Isabella Ivy

You could have written this for me, I relate so well to the message. I appreciate, also, that you don't use cliche phrases and are confident enough to use new words. That's where I am right now as well. You might make sure they have a smoother fit. Don't insist on using so many new or difficult words that you compromise flow. Flow is what your readers trust in. When it flows, they relax and put their trust in your talent. And you are talented. I liked this read and the painted-over-portrait image was spot on! :) I.I.